Thought you had a really good cast. Slow motion was effective. Too short though.
Nice editing.. especially sound haDidn't really see a storyline though, but really good transitions like picture in picture
If you hadn't put this in slow motion it would have been even shorter. Interesting to play around with sound & timings. How wonderful to use split screen, amazing inspiration!!!I would have liked to see your other versions.
Far too comical for this task Eleanor, but I suppose you used some good editing techniques, I like the picture in picture of G Webb
Good editing especially the picture in picture and nice sound effects used! However, the storyline was a bit unclear, but funny all the same!
The use of split screen was good and so were the sound effects, however it could of been longer.
Thought you had a really good cast. Slow motion was effective. Too short though.
ReplyDeleteNice editing.. especially sound ha
ReplyDeleteDidn't really see a storyline though, but really good transitions like picture in picture
If you hadn't put this in slow motion it would have been even shorter. Interesting to play around with sound & timings. How wonderful to use split screen, amazing inspiration!!!
ReplyDeleteI would have liked to see your other versions.
Far too comical for this task Eleanor, but I suppose you used some good editing techniques, I like the picture in picture of G Webb
ReplyDeleteGood editing especially the picture in picture and nice sound effects used! However, the storyline was a bit unclear, but funny all the same!
ReplyDeleteThe use of split screen was good and so were the sound effects, however it could of been longer.
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